Laflamme 376 Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 (edited) Draft Day After a long hot Summer, the VHL draft has finally creped upon us all. Antsy young players have been very nervous and anxious for this special day. Futures are going to change after this day. With that being said young defence man Pablo Escabar woke up just like he does every morning. Not a thing changed. Pablo was more excited than nervous. He was very excited that his life was about to change as he knew it. Pablo Escabar put on his special fancy tux that he got from his agent, it was very unique. The suit was made of snake skin or crocodile. I'm not quiet sure exactly, but it looked like it was comfy and Escabar look like a boss ass b*tch in it. After Pablo was filled up on food and ready for the day he waited patiently for his ride. A few hours later a limo showed up at his house ready to take Escabar on his journey. The clock on the limo dashboard struck 6:00pm when they pulled up to the front doors of the draft. The draft did not start until eight so Pablo had plenty of time to get a drink and introduce himself to all the general managers. Seemed like Pablo was only there for ten minutes before the draft started. Minutes after the draft was underway the Seattle Bears selected Pablo with the fourth overall pick of the draft. Pablo was through the moon. Numerous of Pablo's friends are on the Seattle organization. They have been talking back and forth with Pablo all season seeing if there was interest for both teams as well as seeing if both got along. Turns out they are blood brothers. Pablo Escabar's personality fit in perfectly in the Seattle locker room. Pablo is mostly looking forward to be paired up with Phil on the top line and power play for the whole season. Pablo is hoping to learn a lot from Phil, possibly become a HoF player just like Phil. The teams back bone is super active which will help Seattle win a Championship, which Pablo likes the sounds of. Pablo Escabar in a Seattle Bears Uniform. In the pre-season the Bears managed to get one win and one loss. The scored there win against the Cologne Express. The score was 4-2 at the end of the game. Pablo was +2 in +/- and managed to land 3 hits. For the rest of the game Pablo was quiet. The loss was painful. The Quebec Meute beat the Bears 6-2. Pablo had another quiet game. He got a 2 minute tripping penalty as well as a single shot blocked and a single hit. Nerves must have definitely taken control. The Seattle Bears are looking like a top contender for the season. With a stacked team full of actives. Things are looking great for Seattle. As long as they all stay active. With such a great team, Pablo is looking to break records if not this season then definitely the next season. Keep an eye on Pablo as he strives to maintain rookie of the year and show the league he is here to tank. Edited May 1, 2015 by Mr. Escabar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DollarAndADream 3,356 Posted May 2, 2015 Share Posted May 2, 2015 (edited) Content: 3/3 - "he is here to tank. " I hope Seattle tanks. Good article, and great start with your new team! We are instantly rivals with me on Quebec.Grammar: 2/2 - "finally creped upon us" - crept "The scored there win" = they scored their win "With a stacked team full of actives. Things are looking great for Seattle." - should just be a comma and not a new sentence Appearance: 1/1 - Good. Overall: 6/6 Edited May 2, 2015 by DollarAndADream Laflamme 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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