Splat 33 Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 gorlab 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/23844-claimedebs-final5/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
gorlab 4,321 Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 i think u should have erased the grungy texture layer over the render's face n this would really be crackin it looks like eberle is decomposing Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/23844-claimedebs-final5/#findComment-269324 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Splat 33 Posted September 13, 2015 Author Share Posted September 13, 2015 i think u should have erased the grungy texture layer over the render's face n this would really be crackin it looks like eberle is decomposing So just make the face a little clearer? gorlab 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/23844-claimedebs-final5/#findComment-269470 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Splat 33 Posted September 15, 2015 Author Share Posted September 15, 2015 Can these get graded please Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/23844-claimedebs-final5/#findComment-270138 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paramorise 255 Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 Effort:2/2 Yes Looks:2.25/3 I like the color scheme. Just like gorlab, I think that the render could look better if you deleted that grungy texture on his face. I like the render blending with background, but the sig looks unfinished. Text could use some work as well. Creativity:1/1 Yes Total:5.25/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/23844-claimedebs-final5/#findComment-270221 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuffy 346 Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 Effort:2/2 yep Looks:2/3 Too dark for me some t lighting would be good here. Also erase whatever you have on the renders face you usually try ad keep the render fairly clean Text needs work. Also the smudging that you blurred dont look the greatest maybe if you made another render behind the main render and done it it would look better. Creativity:1/1 Claim 5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/23844-claimedebs-final5/#findComment-270236 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted September 21, 2015 Share Posted September 21, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/23844-claimedebs-final5/#findComment-272029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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