GordonBombay66 18 Posted November 12, 2016 Share Posted November 12, 2016 Sorry, was supposed to have more time this week. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/35239-quick-job-reviewed-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Molholt 2,185 Posted December 2, 2016 Share Posted December 2, 2016 Very simple and very dark. It could use some more contrast, as the whole thing is very dark and muted. I'm not a fan of the text running into the edge of the graphic either. The one effect I see seems really out of place, both the placement and color don't seem to fit. I figure you can do much better with this, but it shows that you didn't put a lot of time into it. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/35239-quick-job-reviewed-22/#findComment-393370 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pandar 302 Posted December 4, 2016 Share Posted December 4, 2016 On 11/12/2016 at 6:30 PM, GordonBombay66 said: Sorry, was supposed to have more time this week. As Molholt said, it's just so dark. The placement of the lighting effect doesn't really make sense to me, and there's just a lot of missed potential. Keep at it, and you'll improve in no time! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/35239-quick-job-reviewed-22/#findComment-393848 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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