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Very simple and very dark. It could use some more contrast, as the whole thing is very dark and muted. I'm not a fan of the text running into the edge of the graphic either. The one effect I see seems really out of place, both the placement and color don't seem to fit. I figure you can do much better with this, but it shows that you didn't put a lot of time into it. 

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On 11/12/2016 at 6:30 PM, GordonBombay66 said:

Sorry, was supposed to have more time this week.

 

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As Molholt said, it's just so dark.  The placement of the lighting effect doesn't really make sense to me, and there's just a lot of missed potential.  Keep at it, and you'll improve in no time!

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  • Pandar changed the title to Quick Job [Reviewed] [2/2]

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