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Do we even need to introduce Karl Von Moltke....? 

 

 

Karl Von Moltke entered the VHLM league as another rookie winger. Nobody can predict where a player will end up because it's their decision as to whether they want to be a star player. KVM joined the Ottawa squadrant as one of their lower-tier wingers. Karl Von Moltke was a little bit confused at first as to how the VHL worked. His TPE production was very slow and none of us thought he'd stick with Victory Hockey League. We all thought that he'd be another person to give up on Victory Hockey league because it was "boring" or wasn't "fun enough." His GM let him continue playing for Ottawa despite the uncertainty of his TPE production. He didn't get a large amount of points, but he managed to attain 17 points (6 goals, 11 assists) which is actually quite decent. He left Ottawa to go to the VHLM draft to see where he would play next. Karl waited and waited until his name was called. KVM was chosen by the Las Vegas Aces. He joined their squadrant....but, he got traded before he could play a significant amount of games for them. KVM was quite disappointed about this trade happening, but he knew that he needed to keep his head held high and earn as much TPE as possible to prove Las Vegas wrong. KVM didn't disappoint and his TPE production rose to new locations. GM Shawn talked to KVM about how he wanted him to be one of their top, franchise wingers. Shawn also told him that he wanted him to share his story with his teammates so they can find inspiration. He listened to Shawn and is doing just that, currently. KVM  currently has 194 TPE and is the leading scorer in the VHLM. KVM has also showed little flashes of leadership. All of his teammates (and GM Shawn) are cheering him on because they're excited to see what his future holds as a top player. We aren't going to lie though, he has been busy recently and hasn't been producing as much TPE. He's still attending practices and being active though which we all are thankful for. GM Shawn has been telling him that he doesn't need to worry about updating as much since he's really close to the cap. Shawn also told him that he can take breaks and just watch himself flourish throughout his time in the VHLM. KVM and his team recently clinched a playoff spot so he's super hyped for that. KVM told GM Shawn that he doesn't want to just make a statement in the regular season, but also in the playoffs. At the end of the season, KVM knows that he has a very good chance at taking home several awards. KVM doesn't want to get cocky though, he wants to stay focused and keep on presenting leadership in the locker room after every single game. After the awards, KVM will go onto the VHL to be the next big thing. We hope he thrives in a more "professional atmosphere."

 

 

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JGRS Review
Information: 9/10 Good job showing a lot of information
Readability: 8/10 I think you could separate a lot of it into paragraphs so it is a bit more inviting.

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Paragraphs, please!