Ryan Zabby by Nathan N [1/2]

[NathanN 10]

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

 Nice start to making gfx! I like the idea of the black and white split pics. The bottom pic looks almost retro with the filter you've used.

The top pic would look real sweet if you had lined up his snout to the edge of the players helmet for a more continuous flow from bottom to top.

Also I think if the wolf's fur flowed right to the edge of the players back it would take away the separation of the two pics by removing the line.

I found the font style not too bad but the color seems a little too strong and lettering was a little out of focus. I also found the grey box around it distracting. It could be a bit bigger as well.

This was a good effort Nathan! I hope you keep making these and I def like the split screen color/b&w idea!