Wasty 566 Posted March 7, 2014 Share Posted March 7, 2014 Illustrator Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/5711-claimedjanssen/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, coloring, text, lighting, I'd say you have enough here.Look: 2/3 - The text is not my favorite and it could use some blending and better lighting. Some blending would be better instead of the yellow across the shoulder. I realize Illustrator is not the greatest program but those are a few things I would suggest working on a bit.Creativity: 1/1 - SureTotal: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/5711-claimedjanssen/#findComment-50328 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Bump Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/5711-claimedjanssen/#findComment-50405 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Definitely. Big improvement Look: 2.25/3 - I think it's pretty good, but the middle part is a little bright and a tad distracting. Lighting needs to be improved, but I realise illustrator isn't the best for that. Blending is decent here, and stock work is a little plain. Text is better than usual though. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.25/6 FINAL: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/5711-claimedjanssen/#findComment-51004 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smarch 3,153 Posted March 16, 2014 Share Posted March 16, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/5711-claimedjanssen/#findComment-53976 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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