Sean McGee's Awsome Rookie File [1/2]

[Strooper99 30]

NAME: Sean McGee

AGE: 18

HIEGHT: 5' 10"

WEIGHT: 150

COUNTRY: United States of American

POISITION: Goalie

CURRENT TEAM: San Diego Marlins

CURRENT TPE: 36 (not including 8 from this)

 

Sean is a kid that listens to commands and always wants to help the team. He also plays goalie for lacrosse and he always loved hockey since his first NHL game. He played for the collage of Noter Dame and helped them win the NCAA playoffs. He is a very friendly guy and will help a teammate no matter what. Right now he is playing for the San Diego Marlins, witch the whole team is very nice. He cant wait to play his first game tonight, hopping he does not fail with his low TPE. He was signed by the Marlins the first night he joined.

 

PROS

LEADERSHIP: Being the goalie of this young team he has to be a good leader in defence, so everyone listens to him when in their zone. He is always ready to drop the gloves when a enemy does something wrong to his teammates. He always has his teammate eyes and ears when they need to listen and he always listen to his teammate when he has something to say as well. 

 

AGILITY: Dont let size fool you, Sean can still make save Because of his agility. Because how small he is, he has a lot of agility. He can go from one pipe to the other in a flash. He is always working on agility because the lack of size. 

 

REBOUND CONTROL: When he doesnt stop the puck completly, there is normully a rebound. Thats when his instinces kick in and when the player shoots the rebound, he tries his best to stop it from going in the net.

 

CONS

SIZE: He is only five foot ten so that means he is one of the shortest goalies here. he biggest weakness is high corner shots. He is fast but small. If you are looking for a goalie that is 6' 2" or 6'4" this is not your guy, but if you are looking for all fast and smart this is your guy 100%. 

 

STYLE CONTROL: Even though he has great agility, his style control is not the best. He does work on it but it wont be his best attrubut. He does not always have time and energy to work on this one, but he tries his best to get the job done

 

PENALTY SHOTS: This is most likely his worst stat, he tries to focas on other stuff that he needs more than this. He will try his best in game when there is a penalty shot (But we all know they are not often). So this is sorta ok but he could do better.

 

Expect more of the con stats be better in the future.Thats why Sean McGee is a good rookie to have.

 

 

From your awsome rookie,                  

 

Sean McGee

Edited May 22, 2019 by Strooper99
needed more info

[Strooper99 30]

@Lincoln Tate

 

Thx man, what team r u on

[Strooper99 30]

Thx

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Review:

 

Get a picture up in this bad boy. Show us what you got!

 

On 5/22/2019 at 11:28 AM, Strooper99 said:

NAME: Sean McGee

AGE: 18

HIEGHT: 5' 10"

WEIGHT: 150

COUNTRY: United States of American

POISITION: Goalie

CURRENT TEAM: San Diego Marlins

CURRENT TPE: 36 (not including 8 from this)

 

focus on bolding the headers but not the relevant information. For example:

NAME: Sean McGee

 

On 5/22/2019 at 11:28 AM, Strooper99 said:

Expect more of the con stats be better in the future.Thats why Sean McGee is a good rookie to have.

 

Why should we expect this? What's Sean doing to fix his weaknesses?

 

On 5/22/2019 at 11:28 AM, Strooper99 said:

witch the whole team is very nice

 

which*, and I'm not sure hockey teams want to be known as nice. Also, how is this relevant?

 

On 5/22/2019 at 11:28 AM, Strooper99 said:

He is always ready to drop the gloves when a enemy does something wrong to his teammates

 

A goalie who drops the gloves? Not going to be a goalie for long at that rate.  Fighting doesn't necessarily correlate with leadership.

 

On 5/22/2019 at 11:28 AM, Strooper99 said:

normully

 

Normally. 

 

There's a lot of spelling and grammar errors here, run this one through a spelling and grammar checker. 

 

You're also a bit short at 483 words here. This one needs some work before approval.