Kesler 1,514 Posted April 15, 2014 Share Posted April 15, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7181-claimedwild-one/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted April 17, 2014 Share Posted April 17, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yeah I guess Look: 2/3 - I feel like you've taken a huge step back recently. The text fontface doesn't work, here, something like an arial would have worked slightly better. The whole sig is dark and drab, and could really use some brightening up. The arrow stock is distracting and the render effects just don't work. It also feels a little unfinished as well. I think you might have used a grey stock over top of the whole render and it's definitely throwing the entire sig off for me. Creativity: 1/1 - I suppose so Total: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7181-claimedwild-one/#findComment-64045 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted April 17, 2014 Share Posted April 17, 2014 Effort: 3/3 - I can see it. Look: 2.25/3 - This has potential, but I feel like you wasted the potential here. I really like the render effects and the text could be really good if it was a bit lower, but otherwise there's just not enough. Personally I'm not a fan of the blue stock to the right of the sig, and overall it's just WAY too dark. It looks like you had some good lighting started, but the entirety of the sig is way too dark and lacks contrast. When you're doing lighting, make sure you have the layer with the white brushing at or near the top of the layers. Also, this could use a bit more stock work so it isn't as plain. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.25/6 FINAL GRADE: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7181-claimedwild-one/#findComment-64102 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7181-claimedwild-one/#findComment-118597 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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