Junior review [1/2]

[Jackie4967 18]

   My player Jack Feriancek started around the start of season 69. When he first joined he ever got any requests for a few days but then finally he got asked to a few teams. He joined with the Philadelphia Reapers.

   

But his hockey playing started in middle school. He was not that good he was on the third line in 5th grade. But I was getting better. By 6th grade I was still on the third line but I was score a lot of goals and getting a lot of assists. Once 7th grade came I was dropping a little bit but I was still scoring goals and getting a few assists. Once 8th grade came I was getting better I was scoring almost as many goals as 6th grade and I was going off on assists and I had a few hits also. I knew I needed to work more tough so during the off-season I practice a lot after every off-season and that is how I am this good today. But in high school when tryouts came he made it on JV and played second line. He was still not that good but he was better better and better. Once junior year came he was moved to the first line. So from there on I was first line. Once senior year started I was getting to be a good hockey player I was on the in the top 5 in goals and assists and I was starting to become a team leader. One I got to collage I got asked to Join the Reapers so I accepted.  
  
 Now on the team I am on the third line and I am doing ok. I have 2 assists and no goal but I have played maybe 5 or more games. I hope I will get drafted in the VHL to a team that will give me good playing time. But for now I hope I can keep upgrading my player and try to get my first goal and get a lot of more assists and try to get to the second line of maybe even the first. I also hope I can help my team win games and get to the playoffs and maybe even win it all.I love the team I am on and I hope to get better and better. I also hope to have a good rest on the season. This is my junior review by jackie4967 and my player is Jack Feriancek.

 

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Edited December 1, 2019 by Jackie4967
To make it more clean and fix the picture.

[Greg_Di 1,022]

Review:

Good read about your junior review. There are 2 things lacking though, the requirements state  that for a junior review you require a title, picture, and paragraphs. You are missing a title and pictures to make this stand out more. The second paragraph also needs to be spaced out a bit more as it was getting harder to read the more it went on.