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Effort: 2/2 - Yeah I see it.

Look: 2.5/3 - Big improvement from last week.  I'm docking you for a couple of reasons, however.  I don't really like the text placement here.  It feels like it's too far away from the render.  The left side of the sig also feels empty.  I really like the coloring on this and the lighting is better than normal, however I would have put it on the right side of the render, rather than the left side.  

Creativity: 1/1 - Yes

 

Total: 5.5/6

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Effort: 2/2 - Coloring, text, blending, lighting, stock work,  I'd say you have enough here.

Look: 2.5/3 - Text placement is off and doesn't work, I'm not a fan of the over-blending on the back of the helmet. The coloring is great however and I do like this one from you more so than some others, you gettin better son. The text would have been better a bit bigger and right in front of the render and lower, like he was looking down at it imo.

Creativity: 1/1 - Sure


Total: 5.5/6

 

Final: 6

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