Samurai7 102 Posted May 5, 2014 Share Posted May 5, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7673-claimedchek-pleaseret/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - yes sir. Look: 2.5/3 - Main issue here is the text. Try to stick with simpler fonts for now and build the look on top of the text. It sticks out too much. Effects and colouring are nice, but lighting is a bit weak. Try to brighten up around his face a bit. Creativity: 1/1 - Nice bg work and effects. Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7673-claimedchek-pleaseret/#findComment-70139 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted May 10, 2014 Share Posted May 10, 2014 Effort: 3/3 Look: 2.75/3 - I really like the stock work on this one. Good background, nice lighter stocks, and good coloring. As Jackim mentioned, the text is the major issue. While I would agree in the sentiment to stick with simpler fonts, blocky fonts like this one can still work. I'd personally move the text to the right a bit, remove the gradient, make it darker, move it below some stocks, and add subtext in a lighter font. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.75/6 FINAL GRADE: 6/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7673-claimedchek-pleaseret/#findComment-71580 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7673-claimedchek-pleaseret/#findComment-73195 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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