Michael Fletcher

[IamMOOSE 361]

My first ever true graphic. Took me a shamefully long time to make it. I'm not totally unhappy with it but there's some real talent in this league that make this very amateur.

 

 

 

Render: Ryan Miller

Player: Michael Fletcher (@DragonFire420)

[jhatty8 663]

Review:

 

It's hard to tell how much work you did here (reverse image search oddly has no results) so I'll say what I personally see and don't see.

 

The jersey swap is pretty solid for a first attempt. The logo is super JPEG-ish which is the only fault I see. Not sure if its a scaling issue or you used a low-res logo from the start. I'm not the biggest fan of the text. Usually, I would not leave the text sitting in the corner, but I can see why you did so here. The font is...eh. If that's the style you wanted then go for it but it's not really something you'd see in a graphic. The color is also a bit questionable. If you wanted a blue/green palette here than it's fine, but I think the SDM colors are light blue/yellow (could be wrong, don't know other teams). Looking on the internet at Miller pics, it looks like you might have made the equipment strips a lighter green? If so, good job.

 

For the stuff I don't see, and I could be wrong because I don't know what really went into this. There doesn't really seem to be much done to the image as a whole. No cropping, filters, stocks added, lighting, shapes, colors, etc. It's very basic, and I imagine you were going in that direction, but it looks like text and a jersey swap on a hockey pic. However, it's a start. In the future, you should experiment more, try new stuff, add more cool shit. Cutting out your render and putting them on a background will also help a ton, no-cut sigs are a bit harder to pull off imo.

 

For your first EVER graphic...solid 8/10. Good luck @IamMOOSE