Michael Being Called Up Soon

[Kmatt 35]

Hello! Today we are gonna be doing an analysis on Michael, and how he is gonna be getting called up to the VHL soon! Michael has been working hard on getting up into that majors league, called the VHL and he is really hyped for when he gets up there, because he knows it is gonna be soon enough. Thanks to all his amazing VHLM coaches for getting him this close! Michael will want to finish out his last VHLM season with a good record, so lets hope the Yukon Rush does good this season, maybe a championship before Michael leaves?!

Past Earning: So for the past week or two I have not done to well with earning, But I am coming back better than ever, max earning every week, doing my tasks on mondays, and I am gonna be the best of the best! This article is kind of taking a while to write, But I need to do it to earn, lol.

 

Michael is more of a passing type player, getting many assists, and less goals, he started his first full season scoring pretty good, but now he is starting to rack up assists and assists. Michael kind of wants to be an offensive scoring type of player, so watch out once he gets his scoring up, he will be flexing with his dekes on you everyday. Michael one day wants to be a hall of famer and a coach, with championships and a good record. And he can not do that without the help of his awesome coaches!

 

Season Preview
The Yukon Rush are gearing up for this next season and maybe the last season with Michael, The Coaches are really looking forward to the championship we all know they are gonna win  Once the rush are fully earning, and all of them are earning at the best they can do, and handle, they should be good to go for a championship! Just imagine Michael on that rink, holding up the trophy, celebrating with his teammates filled with joy and happiness on all their achievements! Michael is really happy though, as the VHL team he was drafted too won a championship, the first season he was drafted, and when he actually goes to play on that ice, he is looking forward to winning with them, drinking champagne. Maybe one day Michael will be a millionaire with a yacht

 

Michael will be working very hard with his coaches to do good, and improve at the best rate possible for this next season, and the season in the majors he will be playing! Michael would like to say thanks to the coaches and players, the trainers and even to the people who drive the zambonis, if it was not for you, he would not have this chance of playing.

 

Look out you guys in the majors, and the minors, Michael will be coming back better than ever, looking to bite! GL to everyone this season, best of luck >3

Kmatt, And Michael!

 

 

[Greg_Di 1,028]

Good article! Lots of information on why Michael could be called up to the VHL. Lots of interesting tidbits. To improve on this article and future media posts I would definitely add an image. At the top centered looks good or even halfway through the article. I also noticed that you used "gonna" a lot, maybe try using different words as I believe gonna showed up 3 times in the first sentence. Other then that, great article! keep up the good work

 

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