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Schneiderman

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  1. Effort: 2/2 - Blending, text, lighting, it's there. Look: 2.75/3 - The coloring's a little all over the place. I think the text is good, but it's a little bright for my taste. A nice concept overall. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 5.75/6
  2. Effort: 2/2 - Definitely enough for full marks. Look: 3/3 - The only thing lacking here is some better lighting. Other than that I really like it! Creativity: 1/1 - Yessir Total: 6/6
  3. Effort: 2/2 - Lot's of effort here, especially with the moving clouds effect. Look: 2.5/3 - I'll give this a 2.5 because of the moving clouds effect, but the render looks low-quality. The text isn't great either. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6 Final: 6/6
  4. Effort: 2/2 - Obvious effort on this one. Look: 2.75/3 - The lighting is superb, really makes the render stand out and interesting to look at. The text takes away from the render slightly, because it is so large. Creativity: 1/1 - Uh huh. Total: 5.75/6 Final: 6/6
  5. Effort: 2/2 - Blending, Stock work, text, it's here. Look: 2.5/3 - It's hard to put my finger on it, but something just looks a little "off." The colors are a little "one-note" and I think there could be some more blending done here. The text isn't great and looks over-sharpened. Creativity: 1/1 - You got it. Total: 5.5/6
  6. It looks like it will come down to the Canucks and the Sharks for that third guaranteed playoff spot in the Pacific Division. I won't be surprised if LA pulls it together and gets the second spot, but I could see the Canucks beating out the Sharks. They gotta string some wins together though.
  7. Effort: 2/2 - Definitely. Blending, stock work, text, it's all here. Look: 3/3 - The grunge style really works well here. The text is good and adds to the sig nicely. A little more lighting might have been nice here. Creativity: 1/1 - Yup. Total: 6/6
  8. Effort: 2/2 - Obvious effort here. Look: 3/3 - Love the style, very original and creative. Nice job! Creativity: 1/1 - For sure. Total: 6/6 Final: 6/6
  9. Effort: 2/2 - Gif sig, blending, stock work. You have it all. Look: 2.75/3 - The moving background works well. I really like your stock work. If you had of had some better lighting I would've bumped you up to a 3. Creativity: 1/1 - Definitely Total: 5.75/6
  10. Effort: 2/2 - Blending, text, effects, you definitely have it. Look: 3/3 - I love the blurred text effect. Your stock work is also very nice. I would've liked to see a bit more lighting here, but it's not enough to dock. Creativity: 1/1 - You got it. Total: 6/6
  11. Effort: 1.75/2 - It looks like you just have three components here. I realize it can be tough getting started, but I would've liked to see a bit more effort put into this. Look: 2/3 - The lighting is really lacking here. The text is becoming the focal point instead of the render, that's something you want to avoid. I would suggest looking up some tutorials or downloading some psd's, I think it would help you immensely. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 4.75/6
  12. Effort: 2/2 - Lighting, coloring, effects. You've got it. Look: 2.5/3 - Everything just looks a little low-quality. I don't mind the text, but I'd like to see you "jazz it up" a bit more, it is being lost under the different layers. The red lighting above his helmet seems out of place, I would change it to either blue or green. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 5.5/6
  13. Effort: 1.75/2 - You seem to be new at graphics, but I'd like to see a bit more effort put into some stock work and lighting. Look: 2/3 - Needs some better lighting and blending. The text is hard to read and usually you want at least a portion of it overlapping the render. Your coloring is off as well. I would suggest looking up some tutorials, they will really help you learn some new techniques. Creativity: 1/1 - You got it. Total: 4.75/6
  14. Effort: 2/2 - You got it. Nice job on the jersey change! Look: 2.25/3 - The main problem here is the effects on the render, makes it look low-quality. The text seems like a bit of an afterthought. Nice job on the background stock work though! Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.25/6
  15. Effort: 2/2 - Blending, coloring, lighting. You got it. Look: 2.5/3 - The render looks pretty low-quality, it really hinders from the rest of the sig. Your lighting is very nice and the background stock work is good as well. Keep at it, you're really improving! Creativity: 1/1 - You got it. Total: 5.5/6
  16. Effort: 2/2 - Obvious effort here. Look: 3/3 - My only complaint would be the logo in place of the "O." Other than that, beautiful work as always. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 6/6
  17. Effort: 2/2 - Lighting, coloring, blending, it's all there. Look: 3/3 - I was close to giving this a 2.75 because it feels like it is "lacking" a bit on the right side. Your lighting and coloring make up for it though. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 6/6
  18. Effort: 2/2 - Obvious effort here. Jersey change, text, coloring. Nice job. Look: 2.5/3 - I'll agree with Bushito that it needs better lighting. I don't mind the text, but I think it could be placed more effectively. There are definitely some nice elements to this. Creativity: 1/1 - For sure. Total: 5.5/6 Final: 6/6
  19. Effort: 2/2 - Absolutely. Lots of effort evident in this one. Look: 2/3 - This is a bit of a step down from your recent ones. The blending is strange, and the text is very bland. Adjusting the coloring would go a long way. Creativity: 1/1 - You got it. Total: 5/6 Final: 5/6
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