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Sorry for background cant help it

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Sorry for background cant help it

So Bedirhan arives ad halifax and whent to the press and said 
 
I made a mistake
 
Press:tell me why i
 
It was a dum thing
 
Press:tell me why i
 
I wanna play hockey
 
Press:tell me why u
 
I wanna win the big game
 
And than the Gm talked about it and it was a boring Press
 
Bedirhan was happy for ones in his life and than,his Phone whent off a lady was on the line,she said she was a one night stand and his daughter is born and he need to take care of her.Bedirhan ask how old is she 17 and than he said what is her name,the lady said Aurora Skylight she plays for universitey of halifax she plays every position and than Bedirhan thought to visit her,And whent after all the things to The school and than he whent to the hockey team.Luck was struct and he whent to halifax uni vs yale and the game was amazing 
 
SKYLIGHT IS RACING WITH HER SPEED AND SHE CUTS THE DEFENCE OF SHE FLIPS THE PUCK AND A SHOT TRUE THE NET! 
 
SKYLIGHT GIVES A LONG PASS TO HER TEAM MATE AND ITS A NOTHER ASSIST
 
SKYLIGHT SHE BLOCKS THE 7 FOOT 200 POUNDS DEFENCE WITH HER BODY
 
Bedirhan was trilled whent to the gm pace and ask to talk to her and said im her father,Bedirhan waited after the game but watched it and after whent to her after the game,Skylight said dont touch me creep but than saw Paard and kicks him in the balls,Bedirhan was down on the grond and than she relized it is her father and said, where the Hell you think you can talk to me leaving me for youre career, but than in a long time she relized the situation of his, they talked for hours and she said her story
 
Aurora Skylight age 17
 
Born:Canada Halifax
 
Position every god dam position but is mostly center
 
School universitey of Halifax 
 
She talked about going to Halifax because her idol was a good player 
 
Bedirhan was saying good bye after a good Coffee and whent home and than said onething i wil try to win for you and she Waved happy goodbye for now
 
Bedirhan was training hard and hard he was going crazy in the Gym and skate fast he was doing olies and a tre flip and more he was doing a 900 on a ramp but than skate on ice and ice dance as training a wierd thing of him but he things it wil help good and he wil do good he was shooting puks left and right and center he was amazing in a amazing form he was amazing turkish legend, what wil he do in the games he would love it and be a good player.
 
I hope you like this story it would be his last season than his daughter she wil be Center and a strong small shooter with passes like Beckham with her small body or tall or heavy i dont know but she is going to be next season wonder and killer of the goal post im going to creath it like comics
 

TIME SKIPS LIKE ANIME the paard univers is amazing and i wanna make it draft age more young draft age
 
 

Paard stops with hockey when dochter enters draft class 89,It is a f mess out there,Aurora skylight whent to the press of the universety.
Im going to enter the draft and hope i be first overall
 
press: cut te case what happend to youre father Bedirhan
 
how do you know who my dad is 
 
press: internet
 
And than a brawl started out it was crazy,People got punchend by aurora it was crazy,
 
press: What is did? Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more 
 
Press from the back: oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo
 
I will fing kill you with my hockey stick
her team mates try to stop her but with her Horse power she was strong enough to get every Defence player to hold her plus some extra people. it was not enough she made them flying and she was just so mad but than fell asleep.

some hours later
paard was next to her and said youre okay. and he gave her food while she is tired and still mad but she put her glasses on and whent take off to home, when home took a shower and than did try outs ad Halifax because the maneger wants her on the team with her talent, and when she arives extra early shawn the manager i think it is his name,just made her extra ice laps to warm up, he saw how fast she is as a skater and how amazing she can act with her skill, and her level she need more time to devolep but she is strong trainer like her old man and she going to be a good talent not like her dad but maby lil bit beter with words out of the mouth.
 
im your Hockey girl, I'm livin' in my own world I ain't Bad, call me the best You can't touch me there, you can't touch my skates Unless I say so, im youre hockey girl
 
singing her song like a pro and she was death searius when she sing like a manence her song style is so cool she talks only about hockey, she was after the skate laps doing fast drils and shooting drils to help her real good, she was inpressing the team with her work adic because she can do it all atleast her words, paard also watch her do her training he was silent like a mouse and after that she whent to paard and was sitting with him because she wants her dad and than to the lockerroom and when she was done a knock ad the door and shawn came with the line up and than left.

is she going to be starting or not maby bench but who knows like more and we will know what going to happen in part 4 we wil see it so much soon and try to geuse the songs like what song did i use in the story
Part 4 coming soon

Age 18 blah blah blah her point in her story she going to vind out what her  True self and her development as a player in de sport of hockey and going to restore her dad fate in the sport and she going to accept her paard background and going to evolve it and maby going to make her a music lover in the vhl/vhle/vhlm im going to age her as well because that is evolution and im going to create her as a real good center she is a good prospect she going to try to earn 8 or 10 tpe if i do it right and tight if it is not tight it is not right. 
 
But she is going to crazy she going to be 89 draft she is in the paard univers i call it if you wanna be in that vhl/vhle/vhlm univers and wanna be part of the story send me a dm on discord or vlh pf and i wil read it and than youre in the univers I WILL USE THE CHARACHTER MY OWN WAY OF THE STORY. so you can be bad or good depends on my flair of sobe opra style drama style horror style 
 
Enough of that we going to make her the best atleast my team of artist that are my skate friends and im going to be Joy of pride that im going to make her the best posibel way of the player she is now in halifax and her career hopefully is going to be in halifax in the draft 

Age 18 blah blah blah her point in her story she going to vind out what her  True self and her development as a player in de sport of hockey and going to restore her dad fate in the sport and she going to accept her paard background and going to evolve it and maby going to make her a music lover in the vhl/vhle/vhlm im going to age her as well because that is evolution and im going to create her as a real good center she is a good prospect she going to try to earn 8 or 10 tpe if i do it right and tight if it is not tight it is not right. 
 
But she is going to crazy she going to be 89 draft she is in the paard univers i call it if you wanna be in that vhl/vhle/vhlm univers and wanna be part of the story send me a dm on discord or vlh pf and i wil read it and than youre in the univers I WILL USE THE CHARACHTER MY OWN WAY OF THE STORY. so you can be bad or good depends on my flair of sobe opra style drama style horror style 
 
Enough of that we going to make her the best atleast my team of artist that are my skate friends and im going to be Joy of pride that im going to make her the best posibel way of the player she is now in halifax and her career hopefully is going to be in halifax in the draft 

No worries, you can always ask for help.  Lots of people here know what they are talking about so we can give you feedback that might even help improve your English if you are ok with that!
 
Young players do take some time to grow!  She seems like a hard worker so I'm sure she will become a positive leader for her team!

Thx for youre explain im not so good with english not naitive

Thx for youre explain im not so good with english not naitive

You like something but what are periods 

Paard stops with hockey when dochter enters draft class 89,It is a f mess out there,Aurora skylight whent to the press of the universety.
Im going to enter the draft and hope i be first overall
 
press: cut te case what happend to youre father Bedirhan
 
how do you know who my dad is 
 
press: internet
 
And than a brawl started out it was crazy,People got punchend by aurora it was crazy,
 
press: What is did? Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more 
 
Press from the back: oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo
 
I will fing kill you with my hockey stick
her team mates try to stop her but with her Horse power she was strong enough to get every Defence player to hold her plus some extra people. it was not enough she made them flying and she was just so mad but than fell asleep.

some hours later
paard was next to her and said youre okay. and he gave her food while she is tired and still mad but she put her glasses on and whent take off to home, when home took a shower and than did try outs ad Halifax because the maneger wants her on the team with her talent, and when she arives extra early shawn the manager i think it is his name,just made her extra ice laps to warm up, he saw how fast she is as a skater and how amazing she can act with her skill, and her level she need more time to devolep but she is strong trainer like her old man and she going to be a good talent not like her dad but maby lil bit beter with words out of the mouth.
 
im your Hockey girl, I'm livin' in my own world I ain't Bad, call me the best You can't touch me there, you can't touch my skates Unless I say so, im youre hockey girl
 
singing her song like a pro and she was death searius when she sing like a manence her song style is so cool she talks only about hockey, she was after the skate laps doing fast drils and shooting drils to help her real good, she was inpressing the team with her work adic because she can do it all atleast her words, paard also watch her do her training he was silent like a mouse and after that she whent to paard and was sitting with him because she wants her dad and than to the lockerroom and when she was done a knock ad the door and shawn came with the line up and than left.

is she going to be starting or not maby bench but who knows like more and we will know what going to happen in part 4 we wil see it so much soon and try to geuse the songs like what song did i use in the story
Part 4 coming soon

Paard stops with hockey when dochter enters draft class 89,It is a f mess out there,Aurora skylight whent to the press of the universety.
Im going to enter the draft and hope i be first overall
 
press: cut te case what happend to youre father Bedirhan
 
how do you know who my dad is 
 
press: internet
 
And than a brawl started out it was crazy,People got punchend by aurora it was crazy,
 
press: What is did? Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more 
 
Press from the back: oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo
 
I will fing kill you with my hockey stick
her team mates try to stop her but with her Horse power she was strong enough to get every Defence player to hold her plus some extra people. it was not enough she made them flying and she was just so mad but than fell asleep.

some hours later
paard was next to her and said youre okay. and he gave her food while she is tired and still mad but she put her glasses on and whent take off to home, when home took a shower and than did try outs ad Halifax because the maneger wants her on the team with her talent, and when she arives extra early shawn the manager i think it is his name,just made her extra ice laps to warm up, he saw how fast she is as a skater and how amazing she can act with her skill, and her level she need more time to devolep but she is strong trainer like her old man and she going to be a good talent not like her dad but maby lil bit beter with words out of the mouth.
 
im your Hockey girl, I'm livin' in my own world I ain't Bad, call me the best You can't touch me there, you can't touch my skates Unless I say so, im youre hockey girl
 
singing her song like a pro and she was death searius when she sing like a manence her song style is so cool she talks only about hockey, she was after the skate laps doing fast drils and shooting drils to help her real good, she was inpressing the team with her work adic because she can do it all atleast her words, paard also watch her do her training he was silent like a mouse and after that she whent to paard and was sitting with him because she wants her dad and than to the lockerroom and when she was done a knock ad the door and shawn came with the line up and than left.

is she going to be starting or not maby bench but who knows like more and we will know what going to happen in part 4 we wil see it so much soon and try to geuse the songs like what song did i use in the story
Part 4 coming soon

i like how sometimes you used periods, 10/10.

Player Information
Username: Bedirhan
Player Name: Aurora Skylight
Recruited From: Other (i retire for the story)
Age: 18
Position: C
Height: 65 in.
Weight: 140 lbs.
Birthplace: Canada

Player Page
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Player Information
Username: Bedirhan
Player Name: Aurora Skylight
Recruited From: Other (i retire for the story)
Age: 18
Position: C
Height: 65 in.
Weight: 140 lbs.
Birthplace: Canada

Player Page
@VHLM GM

So Bedirhan arives ad halifax and whent to the press and said 
 
I made a mistake
 
Press:tell me why i
 
It was a dum thing
 
Press:tell me why i
 
I wanna play hockey
 
Press:tell me why u
 
I wanna win the big game
 
And than the Gm talked about it and it was a boring Press
 
Bedirhan was happy for ones in his life and than,his Phone whent off a lady was on the line,she said she was a one night stand and his daughter is born and he need to take care of her.Bedirhan ask how old is she 17 and than he said what is her name,the lady said Aurora Skylight she plays for universitey of halifax she plays every position and than Bedirhan thought to visit her,And whent after all the things to The school and than he whent to the hockey team.Luck was struct and he whent to halifax uni vs yale and the game was amazing 
 
SKYLIGHT IS RACING WITH HER SPEED AND SHE CUTS THE DEFENCE OF SHE FLIPS THE PUCK AND A SHOT TRUE THE NET! 
 
SKYLIGHT GIVES A LONG PASS TO HER TEAM MATE AND ITS A NOTHER ASSIST
 
SKYLIGHT SHE BLOCKS THE 7 FOOT 200 POUNDS DEFENCE WITH HER BODY
 
Bedirhan was trilled whent to the gm pace and ask to talk to her and said im her father,Bedirhan waited after the game but watched it and after whent to her after the game,Skylight said dont touch me creep but than saw Paard and kicks him in the balls,Bedirhan was down on the grond and than she relized it is her father and said, where the Hell you think you can talk to me leaving me for youre career, but than in a long time she relized the situation of his, they talked for hours and she said her story
 
Aurora Skylight age 17
 
Born:Canada Halifax
 
Position every god dam position but is mostly center
 
School universitey of Halifax 
 
She talked about going to Halifax because her idol was a good player 
 
Bedirhan was saying good bye after a good Coffee and whent home and than said onething i wil try to win for you and she Waved happy goodbye for now
 
Bedirhan was training hard and hard he was going crazy in the Gym and skate fast he was doing olies and a tre flip and more he was doing a 900 on a ramp but than skate on ice and ice dance as training a wierd thing of him but he things it wil help good and he wil do good he was shooting puks left and right and center he was amazing in a amazing form he was amazing turkish legend, what wil he do in the games he would love it and be a good player.
 
I hope you like this story it would be his last season than his daughter she wil be Center and a strong small shooter with passes like Beckham with her small body or tall or heavy i dont know but she is going to be next season wonder and killer of the goal post im going to creath it like comics