Review:
- Well that is certainly a ridiculous way to start out your career in NY! Wonderful, energetic, and full of pep, this story has gone from a humble rookie stepping off a plane to a superstar loose in the Big Apple. It's got everything! I would have personally centered the picture under the title but that's small stuff in the big city.
Good luck there! See you around! Can't wait to read Part 2 @Dalton Wilcox