More sig practice

[mattyIceman 1,214]

@Hank

Edited March 27, 2021 by MattyIce

[STZ 5,360]

Review:

There are some cool things in here that I like. Right off the hop I love the text. The stroke with the offset text is really cool with the texture mapped over it. It's actually really strong. Obviously the overall size makes for kinda an awkward positioning of everything. There's a lot of unused area at the top that probably could be cropped out. The BG is decent you can tell you used multiple textures and used some green colouring. The render effect is a little overpowering, especially around the face area. The filter or effect you used did kind of take the image quality down and you can really notice it on the player and jersey. Overall, it's great to see you practicing, and improving. Some really nice stuff, hopefully some of the things I pointed out might help!

 

7/10

[Tape-to-Tape 298]

Reviewing

My favorite part of this one is the text. It is a cool choice and pops off the rendered player behind it. There is a lot of dead space at the top so it could have been cropped down. Mentioning the team the player plays for is also something to make the graphic more complete or a swapped logo. 7/10