Dom 1,445 Posted July 18, 2021 Share Posted July 18, 2021 @Laine Ricer13 and Laine 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105886-laine-in-davos/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator Ricer13 2,796 Posted July 18, 2021 Moderator Share Posted July 18, 2021 Review: Nice work Dom! The jersey swap looks really nice with the purple. I appreciate the solid attempt on the logo swaps for the chest and the shoulders. There are little tricks that you can learn to help those blend a little better with the jersey but your placement is on point. I absolutely love the font choice but my only criticism of it is that it is too dark. Its very hard to read the "Patrick". Just something to be mindful of with future graphics. Overall though a very solid graphic and I am fired up to be playing with Laine in Davos. Rating: 7.5/10 Dom and Laine 1 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105886-laine-in-davos/#findComment-861423 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dom 1,445 Posted July 18, 2021 Author Share Posted July 18, 2021 6 minutes ago, Ricer13 said: my only criticism of it is that it is too dark yeah maybe the vignette I added is too much, I will surely be more careful about that next time Ricer13 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105886-laine-in-davos/#findComment-861429 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vat 234 Posted July 18, 2021 Share Posted July 18, 2021 Review: I really like this graphic as a whole and I really like the logo swap along with the jersey color. Altough the logo swap police never fails, on the secondary crest on the front side they can see that there is a Colombus blue jackets logo, unacceptable (not really though tbh). I do like basically everything else other than that it's hard to read the last part of the name "Patrick) as it is pretty dark there, other than that i really like it! 8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105886-laine-in-davos/#findComment-861553 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prout 373 Posted July 19, 2021 Share Posted July 19, 2021 Review time; the jersey is sick idc what anyone else thinks about it I absolutely love it. That’s great detail in my eyes. I’d like to see the text abit more better. Other then that the font of the text is nice just would like to see it more. Great sig! 9/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105886-laine-in-davos/#findComment-861821 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattyIceman 1,213 Posted July 19, 2021 Share Posted July 19, 2021 Review time! About time! Love the look and feel, it's a little too dark and hard to make out the name. Maybe putting the text in a lighter font gradient and in a bottom corner fixes the look. Points for the logo swap, its just too straight and a bit small, needed to be on an angle instead of just rotated. Solid try. 7.8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105886-laine-in-davos/#findComment-861835 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trunkxolotl 173 Posted July 19, 2021 Share Posted July 19, 2021 The colour swap is on point and I'm envious on how well it turned out! The shoulder patches are a nice touch, but look slightly off- probably could just use some warping of their shape to help contour to his shoulders more. The font is great, but like the others said it's hard to read with how dark it is. I'd suggest using a faint white outline around it to help it pop and stand out just a little bit. Otherwise, fantastic work! 8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/105886-laine-in-davos/#findComment-861977 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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