Gaikoku-hito 2,135 Posted September 1, 2021 Share Posted September 1, 2021 JB123, Red, Dom and 1 other 1 3 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107761-not-good-enough/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
tinafrombobsburgers 367 Posted September 1, 2021 Share Posted September 1, 2021 Review: I really like this concept! The layout of the photo and headline are nice! Looks like it’s a first page of an article. Everything looks like it could be a tad bigger! But overall really like it and the idea! Need more like this! 8/10 Gaikoku-hito 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107761-not-good-enough/#findComment-870189 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Bohannan 130 Posted September 1, 2021 Share Posted September 1, 2021 The first thing is definitely the size of the picture. I mean I can see what's happening there, but just by default I wish it would be bigger. For what you intended to make you have done it and I like it. It's simple, but hits all the spots. Kudos to you for the work on jersey swaps. Not the cleanest work, but it's done and the image size maybe even helps. And one last thing is that I wish you would have put a bit brighter outline for "PHANTOMS", so it stands out a bit more on the black background. Also Im not sore why you squashed the header text. My rating: 7/10 Gaikoku-hito 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107761-not-good-enough/#findComment-870358 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timmy Turner 18 Posted September 2, 2021 Share Posted September 2, 2021 I really like the dark tone of the graphic, it fits very well with the information your presenting. I would have definitely preferred if the picture was the entire background for the graphic. The black bars around the image feel like un-used space and makes the purple font a bit hard to read. The jerseys in the image look well done, definitely keep doing what your doing there. Overall I think it works well together. Rating: 8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/107761-not-good-enough/#findComment-870431 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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