After retirement

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Chicken Wing only has 2 more seasons left until she retires, then after that her hockey career is over. Of course, she still plans on playing some hockey just for fun with friends and family, but she will no longer be required to eat healthy and exercise and dedicate her life to VHL. 

 

After Chicken Wing retires she plans to go on many vacations and travel the world. Ever since Wing joined the VHL, she always planned that the first thing she would do when she retired was to go back home to Poland and spend at least a year there with her family before traveling. But, Considering she is now back in her hometown playing for the Warsaw Predators, she sees her family all the time and they always attend her home games, so therefore Wing plans to start her travels as soon as she retires. First, she plans on visiting Japan, as that had always been her dream travel destination. This is a gorgeous country, especially in the spring when the cherry blossom trees are blooming; it would be amazing to have a picnic outside with the new and interesting Japanese snacks and awesome scenery. Victoria, British Columbia is another destination she wishes to travel to, as she has never been there and heard it was very beautiful and a great vacation spot. While there are many countries and cities she wishes to vacation to, these are just two spots among the many that Chicken Wing plans to travel to first. 

 

Once Chicken Wing has traveled to most of her dream destinations, she plans on settling down in Canada and having a family. With her money saved up, she plans on putting her kids into hockey and any other sport they wish to pursue, but hoping they follow in her footsteps and join the VHL just like her. Of course, before her kids go off to college, join the VHL, or wherever they may go, she plans on vacationing as a family to all the places she hasn't been yet, or taking them to her favorite travel destinations. Wing's retirement plan mostly consists of traveling, so even after her kids move out, she plans to travel to many more places, just her and her husband.

 

Now onto the things Chicken Wing plans on buying after she retires. After buying a house with her family in Canada, she plans on buying three cars, her first car will be a Lamborghini which she will use for driving around town. Her second car will be a Jeep for going to the beach and off-roading with the roof down and doors off on those hot summer days. Last but not least she needs a car for her family, so she will have to have an SUV which is family friendly and good for traveling.

 

Chicken Wing plans on having a happy, and definitely not boring retirement. To keep herself and her kids occupied when they're not traveling. There will definitely be an arcade room in her house, along with a skating rink where her and her friends and family can play hockey anytime they want, and much more, as she did play in the VHL (and VHLM) for 10 years before retiring, which made her wealthy enough to buy anything her heart desired. 

 

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9.5/10

 

I like your plans! Traveling is a great way to spend retirement and it sounds like you made a nice amount of cash during your career, so sounds like good times. The article is easy to read. The structure is clean. I think the flow of the text is smooth. The article goes from point to point and in a logical order. Perhaps the picture at the top could be better in the middle somewhere, so you could use a bigger one at the top? I don't know. I can't think of any major suggestions. Nice article!