another miss

[scoop 3,432]

[STZ 5,360]

Review:

Theres a lot of things that are pretty nice about this - I think it can be elevated with a few changes. I’ll start with the things I like; the blur and wind effect is really cool. I think you’ve done a good job blending it to make the render have some interesting focal points. I actually think the technique used is good and had you done even a basic JC it would have looked great after the effects were put through. The text is good but you should have used some green to make it pop more. The subtext is way too dark and makes it fee a bit awkward. I’d also move the text to the left a bit. I think there’s a good base here - could be a cool piece to collab with!

 

8/10

[BOOM 8,756]

23 hours ago, scoop said:

 

It can be difficult to work with a majority dark BG and then successfully make the render pop. The forehead is too bright and I think the Wild logo could have been either blurred more, or removed completely. Text is OK, but as STZ suggested, maybe the placement could be changed. I like the concept but it needs a little more work to really bring it out. 7/10