mathematics

[Enorama 2,038]

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[STZ 5,360]

Review:

Really strong work here. I really like the layout, The look is super clean. I love the jersey texture BG, as it fades to white into the bottom with the smoke brush on top of it. Three jersey changes is a lot of work, and they are all very detailed. The text is nice, I really like how the main render pops on top of it. Only a couple things I noticed; the reds seem to bleed into each other. I think when doing the jersey changes the reds got a little too bright - You can really notice this in the face of the render to the furthest right. There seems to be reddening in the ears and nose, that don't seem natural. Even if it is the natural look, maybe a touchup of desaturation or sponge tool could help with that. I like the layout, but I think a simple swap could really help the balance of the graphic. ie: if you swapped the B+W render box with the "DC" text, it might look more balanced; there's definitely something that is making it feel off balance. Overall, killer work, you're getting better every week - looking forward to your next submission. 10/10