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Effort: 2/2 - The BG doesn’t look too fancy but benefit of the doubt here.

 

Look: 2.25/3 - The effects on the render (topaz) look pretty cool with the piece and I like what you’ve done lighting wise. Where the docking is coming into play is the text and the BG. The text placement is alright but the text itself is quite distracting being white with that stroke. I would tone it down a bit and maybe blend it a bit more so that it doesn’t pull the eye. The BG has a similar problem. At it’s core it does look cool but the marble looking thing is so sharp and colorful that it pulls the eye way more than it should. Possibly some blending would help this out.

 

Creativity: 1/1 - I don’t see a problem here

 

Total: 5.25/6

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Effort: 2/2 - Yep

Look: 2.5/3 - I'm not big on the text, or the background, but the render effects and lighting are enough for me to give you a 2.5.  Overall it looks good, just needs some better blending to really help the text and the background here.

Creativity: 1/1 - Yep

 

 

Total: 5.5/6

 

FINAL: 5/6

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