Alpha1 11 Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 boubabi and Will 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12067-claimedlindberg/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,033 Posted September 8, 2014 Commissioner Share Posted September 8, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - The BG doesn’t look too fancy but benefit of the doubt here. Look: 2.25/3 - The effects on the render (topaz) look pretty cool with the piece and I like what you’ve done lighting wise. Where the docking is coming into play is the text and the BG. The text placement is alright but the text itself is quite distracting being white with that stroke. I would tone it down a bit and maybe blend it a bit more so that it doesn’t pull the eye. The BG has a similar problem. At it’s core it does look cool but the marble looking thing is so sharp and colorful that it pulls the eye way more than it should. Possibly some blending would help this out. Creativity: 1/1 - I don’t see a problem here Total: 5.25/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12067-claimedlindberg/#findComment-118203 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.5/3 - I'm not big on the text, or the background, but the render effects and lighting are enough for me to give you a 2.5. Overall it looks good, just needs some better blending to really help the text and the background here. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6 FINAL: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12067-claimedlindberg/#findComment-118659 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12067-claimedlindberg/#findComment-121202 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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