d3vilsfire 132 Posted September 28, 2014 Share Posted September 28, 2014 eaglesfan036 and Frank 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12637-claimedkja-d/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted September 28, 2014 Share Posted September 28, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 1.75/3 - I think the general idea behind this is pretty cool, but a couple of things are really holding it back. I think the stocks are really overpowering the render. I would keep working on stock work in general, because it's really easy to overdo stockwork. The lighting is also not working for me. The text would work better without the gradient on it as well. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 4.75/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12637-claimedkja-d/#findComment-128688 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Coloring, blending, lighting, text, you have it. Look: 1.75/3 - I think the Coloring is a bit much here. The size is way too large and detracting from the quality. The text could use help as well. I like that you're trying new things and progressing, keep at it. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 4.75/6 Final: 5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12637-claimedkja-d/#findComment-129270 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12637-claimedkja-d/#findComment-130125 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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