Rent A McZ 23 Posted October 19, 2013 Share Posted October 19, 2013 (edited) Chris McZehrl with a Comeback for the VHL Chris gave a short interview yesterday and now he is here for a longer Interview for the VHL Universe. He will talk about himself and the future. He will talk too about Turku and Davos. Chris:„Hey Ladie and Gentlements, yes i am back for the VHL and i wll give all what i can for my comeback. I am here for my teams in the VHLM and VHL. Now i hope i can train enough for the teams and gets a chance for the VHL. Right now i am on a Rebuild Team, the Turku Outlaws. But yes, i am the best Scoring Center of the league and that is the start for me in the VHL for the future. My 2 GMs are very happy that i am back and help me a little bit now. I must work very hard now for my Goals, but i want it so bad …. that i know i do that. The last point for coming here to the media is, that i want the Best Scoring Player Award this season and i will do all what i can for that Award. We see us later guys on the ice.“ This short Interview is very clearly for the VHL Universe and give us the hopeness that Chris will be stay active this time. We the Sky Sports will follow his way. Chris has scored 10 Goals and 13 Assists in 11 Games. But he has with his rebuild team a -4 rating. That is not very good and he want a better performance for themselves. He has 33 Hits in 11 Games and that is not bad, because he has a small issue in checking and hitting. With 66 Shots and 10 Goals he have a Shotpercantage of 15.15%. With 12 Blocked Shots he is the best Defensive Forward on the Team. Chris plays 300 minutes in this season and that says 27.30 minutes per game. He won 56.80% Faceoffs and is the seventh best center in this category. Chris has a Points per 20 minutes rating of 1.53 and is the fourth best player in this category. With 3 Game Winning Goals he has a tie on the 2nd place with Mikhail Mikhailovich. The most incredible statistic is the Scoring Streak by Chris. He scored in each Game of the 11 Games in the Season 35. Chris had lost the two last or three years and he knows it could be too late for being a SUPERSTAR. But he will try it and want this chance. Only his boss knows if he get this chance and if he will play in the VHL. 452 words and 1 pic Edited October 20, 2013 by Chris-McZehrl Sixersfan594 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/1419-claimedsky-sports-meet-chris-mczehrl/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squinty 116 Posted October 19, 2013 Share Posted October 19, 2013 gotta be at least 450 words my man Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/1419-claimedsky-sports-meet-chris-mczehrl/#findComment-5614 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rent A McZ 23 Posted October 19, 2013 Author Share Posted October 19, 2013 gotta be at least 450 words my man so better? Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/1419-claimedsky-sports-meet-chris-mczehrl/#findComment-5619 Share on other sites More sharing options...
8Ovechkin8 262 Posted October 20, 2013 Share Posted October 20, 2013 good luck to everyone involved in this MS. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/1419-claimedsky-sports-meet-chris-mczehrl/#findComment-5634 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomsday 4,130 Posted October 28, 2013 Share Posted October 28, 2013 Content: 2/3 - I counted even less than the bare-minimum 452 you claimed (I got 424 not counting the title). On top of the numerous grammatical errors, two points is generous here. Grammar: 0/2 - Here's just a handful of the stuff going wrong here: He will talk too about Turku and Davos. = He will also talk about Turku and Davos. „Hey Ladie and Gentlements = Hey ladies and gentlemen i = I (When referring to yourself, I is always capitalized.) i wll give all what i can for my comeback. = I will give all that I can for my comeback. a Rebuild Team, = a rebuilding Team, the best Scoring Center of the league = the best scoring center in the league I don't know if English is your first language, but if you're having difficulty with your writing, I would suggest asking someone to help with proofreading your work. I would be happy to help out with it if you'd like. Appearance: 0/1 - Yyyyyup! Overall: 3/6 - Don't worry, there is nowhere to go but up from here. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/1419-claimedsky-sports-meet-chris-mczehrl/#findComment-7151 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toast 887 Posted November 2, 2013 Share Posted November 2, 2013 Content: 1.5/3 - Yeah, definitely a tough read. It just doesn't flow at all with all of the spelling a grammar errors. I know the minimum is 450 but you didn't even hit that minus your title. You should also always attempt to at least get to 500 words. I recommend reading some other pieces/the rubric before assuming. Grammar: 0/2 Appearance: 1/1 - Good enough. Overall: 2.5/6 FINAL: 3/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/1419-claimedsky-sports-meet-chris-mczehrl/#findComment-8089 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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