jake 84 Posted January 8 Share Posted January 8 Today we will go over Trimiskez Artav arriving in Houston and overviewing the draft. After settling into his new home in Houston, Artav wasted no time in immersing himself in the team's culture and getting to know his new teammates. He quickly bonded with his fellow players, sharing stories and jokes during practice and team dinners. As a rookie, Artav was eager to learn from the experienced players on the team (aka players who have had previous creates) and soak up as much knowledge as he could. But it wasn't just his teammates that made Artav feel at home in Houston. The city's passionate hockey fans welcomed him with open arms. Everywhere he went, people recognized him as a member of the Houston Bulls and showed their support for the team. Artav was touched by the love and enthusiasm from the community, and it made him determined to succeed on the ice. Despite coming from a small town in Greenland, Artav loved hockey. Growing up, he spent countless hours on the frozen lakes and ponds, honing his skills and dreaming of one day playing professionally. And now, that dream was becoming a reality as he prepared to make his debut in the VHLM. Artav was determined to make an impact in his first season with the Houston Bulls. He trained tirelessly, pushing himself to his limits in the gym and on the ice. He was determined to win a cup and help his team as much as he could. As the VHLM season approached, Artav felt a mix of nervousness and excitement. He couldn't wait to hit the ice and play in front of the home crowd. That ends half of this media spot. Draft Overview I will be going over the first round in this section of the media spot. This draft was pretty good and it was almost full of players. There were a ton of great guys and now let's get into it! Halifax snagged an incredible player in Antonia Bucatini who is already capped AT THE START OF THE SEASON. They have been struggling so much and Bucatini will be a huge help for them. Next, a great pick in the draft was Jean-Pierre Devote. They were able to get him 5th and currently he has 206 tpe and is already capped. An incredible pick. A turn-off for other teams could be the 55 defensive coverage, but this is a steal and this is a great player. Then, another steal was Houston getting Chris Reynolds Jr. This was a 157 tpe player picked 14th. It is incredible how he was still available in the second round. Then, another great pick would be the San Diego Marlins grabbing up Alexis Laffayette. They were still available IN THE 20TH PICK OF THE DRAFT. If they weren't drafted here this could've been a 141 tpe player dropping down to the 3rd round. This is a great pick. He also had a decent build. He added 2 tpe to grit though which was sort of, why. Also added 10 tpe to passing which passing isn't the best stat to upgrade. This was a great draft to watch and I will see you guys next week. 545 words claimed for the week of 1/14/2024 Nathan_8, Kisslinger, Mutti and 4 others 4 3 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/143918-trimiskez-artav-settles-in-houston-and-overview-of-draft/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kisslinger 372 Posted January 22 Share Posted January 22 Review 9.5/10 Just wanted to start and say nice article. It is always nice to see people do them! The article is a nice, quick, and easy read which is always appreciated. everything reads smoothly and is full of good information on your player. The grammar and spelling are done well so bravo to that! I like that you tried to format the media spot to make it look much more nice and you even gave some titles which I love to see. If there is anything I can suggest to improve on maybe it would be to indent the paragraphs and or add some photos but that is being nitpicky because I know people have lives and get busy lol. I think you can write some great media spots so it would be nice to see a few more about your player and the way this season is going. Cheers Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/143918-trimiskez-artav-settles-in-houston-and-overview-of-draft/#findComment-1013029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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