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jake

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  • Player
    Trimiskez Artav
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  • Gender
    Male
  • Pronouns
    He/Him
  • Location
    Michigan, USA
  • NHL Team
    Detroit Red Wings
  • Interests
    Money cause money's cool

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  1. 1. Just need to execute better. 2. I think we are doing great. It's nice cause nobody is tired. 3. Houston is the best team and no other team is better than us 4. San Diego. AHH 5. honestly idk 6. I'll get u a ticket to the Houston Space Center tour
  2. Review This media spot was great as the formatting of the article was good. The word selections were also great. I liked how you listed every single player's stats. The All-VHLM first-team squad you assembled did include the best players in the league. Your writing quality is also at an extremely high level, but you don't need to be at a high reading level to understand it. That is a skill that many great writers lack, and you do not.
  3. Review This media spot was very well formatted. However, in my opinion, as you got down to the end of the media spot, you should've left space between the lines. It had caused me to lose interest since I couldn't see the separation easily like I could when you stated the people who had made it into the all-star competition. Still, though, I enjoyed reading. I liked how you researched these players very thoroughly. Great work!
  4. 1. We have officially crossed the halfway point of this season, S92. Through a half season of play, what are you overall thoughts on our team? I think we're doing pretty good rn just as long as everyone can keep earning. Tbh I have been getting a little bored so hopefully nobody else does 2. It's Theme Week! This season's theme for Theme Week is "All-Star". What are you planning on doing for Theme Week? Have you already submitted a Media/Graphic/Podcast? I claimed welfare 3. Weekly tasks sometimes turn into a bore. VHL.com's might not be as interesting as they use to be, or you may get trivia wrong and lose all motivation... If you could choose a new way to earn TPE, what would your task of choice be? Player cards prob 4. Halfway through the season is usually when players finally feel their groove. Daily games create great routines! What is your routine in order to be ready for each and every single game? tbh idk ig rest 5. If you had to choose between only winning team awards, or only winning individual awards, which would you choose and why? If it's a championship by team awards i'd say team awards but anything else tbh individual. Only team award i'm tryna get is a cup. 6. Almost February! One month of 2024 gone already, has anything cool/interesting happened to you in this first month? Not really ig the lions did briefly good
  5. Houston and San Diego have had a ton of meetings. However, only one side has ever been able to come out on top. And that is... San Diego. Houston, this whole season, hasn't won a SINGLE GAME against San Diego. Today we will analyze a few games and why this is. Game 125 This is the first matchup we will look at. This was... embarrassing to say the least. The final score was 5-2. San Diego outshot Houston 38-28. To be honest, looking at the transcript play-by-play... I can't tell you why this happened. Through my brief skim, it looks like Houston just missed shot after shot after shot. Houston was also being LIT UP in the hits section. Houston also hadn't taken great shots, considering the .929 save percentage of the San Diego goalie, Samuel Wazinski @samthemancub. The goaltending on Houston's side was weak, with Ondrej Vencko having a .868 save percentage @Mutti Hopefully, though, Houston can get back at San Diego finally and win a matchup against them. Till next time - jake Claiming for the week ending 1/28 183 words
  6. 1. Lucy Leitner has performed great imo. Just all of our defense in general. 2. Our success will continue. I see us being at a higher rank. 3. Artav has been a man of the spa. A majority of his expenses are at the spa 4. I think it's nice to have a full 4 lines. It just feels like my player has dropped significantly in performance since these new players. 5. Like 80. 6. 200. Already close to it so yea
  7. Review This was an interesting media spot. I like how you tied it in with the fact that you were drafted to Mexico City with the tequila part. I also like how you kept including the friends that you had in previous media spots (Millie and Moxxie). You're pretty much creating a whole lore for your player. I also was kept interested in the story at the start with a ton of detail. I just feel like the story had less quality at the end.
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