Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16080-claimedstropko-final-66/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schneiderman 38 Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Blending, Stock work, text, it's here. Look: 2.5/3 - It's hard to put my finger on it, but something just looks a little "off." The colors are a little "one-note" and I think there could be some more blending done here. The text isn't great and looks over-sharpened. Creativity: 1/1 - You got it. Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16080-claimedstropko-final-66/#findComment-170314 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Definitely enough. Look: 2.75/3 - I like the stock work a lot here. I feel like the text works alright here, but might look better if the tracking was adjusted so it's closer together and, it wasn't so oversharpened like Schneiderman pointed out. I also agree that more blending could be done - maybe some grungy texture stocks might work well to build on the texture you have in the background, or possibly a gradient map to improve on the coloring. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.75/6 FINAL GRADE: 6/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16080-claimedstropko-final-66/#findComment-170371 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoachReilly 688 Posted February 2, 2015 Share Posted February 2, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/16080-claimedstropko-final-66/#findComment-178063 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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