Claimed:Pablo's Off Season In Paradise. [Final 6/6]

[Laflamme 376]

Pablo's Off Season In Paradise

 

The Escabar family packed up their summer clothes and escaped to Costa Rica. Its the warmest season of the year in Costa Rica and they were dying to get away. Air Canada was so excited that Pablo wanted to travel through them that they gave him a really good deal that was almost next to free. When they first got to the resort they were overwhelmed. The people were very nice and polite to the tourist. After they brought them to their room, they were way to excited to stay cooped up inside. Immediately they threw on their swim suits and ran for the beach. The beach was way better then they thought it was going to be, the sand was white and the water was so blue. Starring out towards the ocean, the only thing you could see was waves and the horizon. It seemed like it went forever. Looking down the beach it was the same, never ending and beautiful. The restaurants had better food than most back home, the escabar's ate so much every day. When walking through the resort no matter where you were going there was always bars. It was very good for when your beer got too warm, you could just exchange it for a newly cold one. Mrs. Escabar really enjoyed that.

 

There was things for everyone to do every day, it was impossible to get bored. When Pablo was out fishing, his wife would tan on the boat. If Pablo was playing volleyball on the beach, his wife had the relaxing and soothing spa to go to. They were in paradise. They had reservations at all the fancy restaurants for every other night they were there. The second night they went to the sea food restaurant, they ate so much lobster that they were starting to turn into a lobster. The fourth night they went to the steak house restaurant, unfortunately it was a disappointment. The steaks tasted funny to the Escabar's, it wasn't like the rich well prepared beef they are use to back home. The sixth and final night, Pablo took his wife to a special planned dinner. Pablo had the resort set up the most romantic moon light dinner on the beach for the two of them.

Pablo caught what he described as dinner here.

 

At the end of their trip they were devastated, they did not want to leave. They were having the time of their lives. The bonding time was what they needed and was bringing them closer together. When they are back home they are so busy, they do not see each other as much as they would like to. Although like all good things the trip had to come to an end, weather they did not want it to or not. Pablo knew he had to get back into the weight room and was dying to get back into the rink. As for most women, Mrs. Escabar was already looking into planning another trip on Pablo's next off season for the two of them.

Edited February 15, 2015 by Pablo

[Da Trifecta 1,896]

Thanks for not taking me bro

[Laflamme 376]

Next time!

 

*This is my 1st of 3 for doubles media spot.*

[Frank 5,058]

I drafted diamond_ace's twin tbh. Pablo's gonna be a hall of famer calling it now!

[DollarAndADream 3,356]

Content: 3/3 - Great little article. I'm excited to watch the up and comer that you are.

Grammar: 2/2 - I'm actually surprised that you're missing your TO and TOOs, yet you're getting the THERE/THEIR/THEY'REs right. Just work on the little things, because usually there's a bunch of them. Not enough here to dock, though!

 

"Its the warmest season" - it's

"way to excited to " - way too excited to

"way better then ' - way better THAN

"Starring out towards the ocean' - staring

"the escabar's" - Escabars. Name needs a capital and doesn't need an apostrophe in this case.

"weather they did not wan" - whether. Weather is the condition of the atmosphere.

Appearance: 1/1 - Everything looks good.

Overall: 6/6

 

Make sure to note you're doubling it to 12 on your Update Page. 1/3 Doubles Completed.

Edited February 17, 2015 by DollarAndADream

[Frank 5,058]

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