Paramorise 255 Posted February 18, 2015 Share Posted February 18, 2015 (edited) Edited February 21, 2015 by Paramorise Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17486-claimedpatton-final-56/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted February 19, 2015 Share Posted February 19, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Enough was done here! Look: 2.25/3 - You've done work in all the necessary areas, but some work does need to be done. For text, try to stick to simple fonts...Arial, Helvetica, Times New Roman etc. Use different techniques on top to make them look cool. For stocks, try to stick to a colour theme that suits your render, or use Adjustment Layers to change the whole colour scheme. Finally, make sure your render looks sharp and in focus. Using the sharpen filter once should solve this. Creativity: 1/1 - Good stock work flow. Total: 5.25/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17486-claimedpatton-final-56/#findComment-186022 Share on other sites More sharing options...
iRockstar 307 Posted February 21, 2015 Share Posted February 21, 2015 effort: 2/2 - You've tried, I like trying, thus, full marks! look: 2.25/3 - Lighting, stock work and text are all a little off for my liking. I think better blending would be key to fixing this piece, and adding a better font would make it even better. Keep on working on it, you'll get there. Changes can't be made overnight haha. creativity: 1/1 - yes total: 5.25/6 final: 5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17486-claimedpatton-final-56/#findComment-186918 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoachReilly 688 Posted February 24, 2015 Share Posted February 24, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/17486-claimedpatton-final-56/#findComment-187975 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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