Claimed:Part Three: The Alexander Davidson Story[Final 6/6]

[BigTittySmitty 172]

This for the next week Monday - Sunday updates... bored on this shitty rainy Sunday so I thought I'd do some writing. 

Part Three: Things Looking Up 

 

After the world has changed and the drama has unfolded for the young rookie that was drafted in the 2nd round of the VHLm draft. Who thought he was going to Brampton in a deal that would later be voided due to the termination of DT as General Manager of the Bratislava Watchmen. Alexander Davidson was able to get a fresh start on the VHL. 

 

 

How I felt towards the VHL during the time frame

of this drama with Bart Simpson playing the VHL

 

 

But this article is not about dwelling on the past but as the title suggests its about looking upwards and towards the future. He may not become your league superstar center but at least you can bank on a second line offensive play making center to move the puck to your scoring forwards. What you can bank on is if you give him an opportunity and commitment and patience he will reward you with dedication. Once you piss him off you get on his bad side and that's not good for you. 

 

 

Since the change in management and the change in opportunity Alexander Davidson has finally been able to commit once learning the ropes feeling at home. Once telling the team in private he's here to have fun and for as long as possible. I'd like to remind you folks my Average Minutes per Game have been picking up when there was a stretch I was playing 5-7 minutes a game so that's why when I tell you these stats DO NOT freak out  .

 

In this season I have played 956 minutes as per the index in my rookie season (during this long stretch of 5-7 minutes per game I was 2nd line C on the power play and 2nd defensive pairing on the 3 on 3 penalty kill). The average minutes per game now is 15.17 so its rapidly increasing and so is the point totals. So, let me continue in 63 games this season I've scored 11 goals, 28 assists good for a total of 39 points. Out of the 819 face offs I've taken I've won 62.64% of them so for scouts you are getting someone who believes in winning a face off is important. Alexander Davidson clearly is not a superstar of the Bratislava Watchmen and isn't expecting to go in the first round in the VHL Entry Draft unless someone surprises me. 

 

 

With that said, I know I am not the flashiest player in here and some may say I have made a scene by telling this story. But it is what it is! These stories share the small details and give players like Alexander Davidson the opportunity to shine as they are not the superstars of the league. But that's the Alexander Davidson Story in a nutshell. Time to improve my draft stock!

 

 

[Sixersfan594 247]

Content 3/3 - Good to see you document Davidson's journey, I think you'll be a first rounder due to your SHL player, and this draft class is not deep. 

 

Grammar 2/2 - I'll give you this for now, but please re-read it at least once or twice for next time or else I'll dock. Comma's should be placed in certain sentences and watch the wording in your sentences' 

world has changed and = world has changed, and

Fresh start on the VHL = (Do you mean the site, or in the VHLm? Won't dock for this). 

its about = it's about

off you = off, you

Since the change in management and the change in opportunity Alexander Davidson has finally been able to commit once learning the ropes feeling at home. = This sentence needs a whole new structure

 

Appearance 1/1 - Fine, smaller pictures next time.

 

Giving a 6/6 -- but I'll be more picky next time. 

 

Final 6/6 

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