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Effort 2/2: BG work, text work, effects, lighting. I can see the effort here.

 

Look 2.75/3: I like what's going on here. The colours pop and are kinda fun, the lighting is subtle but well balanced, the BG has enough depth to feel like something is going on. Where I'm docking is the text and the render effects. The text placement is a little off (I would move it more to the right, cover the render a bit more) and the first name just has no real effects going on which is a shame because the last name looks great. I would almost say to cut the first name entirely and it would be better. The render effects are okay but nothing great. Looks like you slapped liquify on it which can be helpful but needs a little more here in my opinion. I would have worked a bit more with the nice coloured triangle theme that you have on the left side, that would have gone a long way. This got way longer than I wanted it to, point is it's pretty good but just needs a bit more work.

Creativity 1/1: Definitely

Overall: 5.75/6

Edited by Beketov
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