Paramorise 255 Posted November 11, 2015 Share Posted November 11, 2015 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25450-claimedzeptenbergs-final-6/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim 182 Posted November 14, 2015 Share Posted November 14, 2015 Effort 2/2: i'd say there's enough here. Look 2.5/3: about how I said the last few sigs you made were too washed out: this one has the same problem except its too dark. its really hard to make out the focal point. also this one needs some more work on lighting and text for full marks from me. Creativity 1/1: sure Overall: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25450-claimedzeptenbergs-final-6/#findComment-286563 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,123 Posted November 15, 2015 Commissioner Share Posted November 15, 2015 Effort 2/2: I can definitely see the effort you put in here. Look 2.5/3: Everything seems a little hazy, not sure if it's the stock work that's doing it or the lack of lighting but it needs to be fixed. Get some good contrast in there and make some things pop. Its okay to have dark spots as long as there are bright spots as well to focus the eye. Speaking of which, the text (which also needs some work BTW) is the focal point which should NEVER happen. The render is heavily blended but it looks like the text is slapped on top which draws the eye toard it way too easily. Creativity 1/1: I'll give you this Overall: 5.5/6 Final: 6/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25450-claimedzeptenbergs-final-6/#findComment-286879 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted November 18, 2015 Share Posted November 18, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/25450-claimedzeptenbergs-final-6/#findComment-287522 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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