NUCK 151 Posted January 21, 2016 Share Posted January 21, 2016 Tim and Kendrick 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27473-claimednuck-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted January 22, 2016 Share Posted January 22, 2016 I like how you used sub font for your texture, it looks great. Not huge on the whole sepia coloring, I think you could go with the original coloring. The font should be lower imo, focal point wise and shits. The lighting is good and your background work looks good too. Looking forward to your next artwork. NUCK 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27473-claimednuck-22/#findComment-305235 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted January 23, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted January 23, 2016 I don’t mind the coloring, I think you worked with it alright. The outline around the player is kinda weird, I would kill that and maybe try to get your lighting a little less angelic and more actually casting light onto the render. Font is okay but as Boub’s said positioning could use some work. Also, try to stay away from the layer FX panel with text. it can be okay sometimes but a lot of the time it just makes text that stands out way too much which is what this does. I see the text way before the render which can work but it doesn’t here. Know the rules before you break the rules. Keep working at it, you’re getting better. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27473-claimednuck-22/#findComment-305581 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted January 26, 2016 Share Posted January 26, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27473-claimednuck-22/#findComment-306191 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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