Splat 33 Posted February 6, 2016 Share Posted February 6, 2016 Ahma 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27950-tumack-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted February 8, 2016 Share Posted February 8, 2016 Looking good. I feel like there's like 10 pixel at the top that could be crop, so the render would fit better. The dup is good and the textures are decent. I would make the render pop a little bit more with some light effects but I think it's good enough. Keep working, practice makes perfect. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27950-tumack-22/#findComment-310009 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,095 Posted February 8, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted February 8, 2016 Boubabi is covering the big stuff, making my job hard haha. Everything he said for sure. Colours blend together pretty well which is nice. Text is a little iffy in this piece but overall I find the effect you were going for to be decent. Don't be afraid to put text closer to the render to keep the focal point in the right spot. Render effects could really make this pop as the render looks pretty flat right now. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/27950-tumack-22/#findComment-310181 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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