Jala 922 Posted March 8, 2016 Share Posted March 8, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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jack 498 Posted March 13, 2016 Share Posted March 13, 2016 Cool work on the text, good placement of it as well. Background is cool, but the little circle on the left edge is a little distracting. I think the overall sig is a little too sepia-y, and then with the splash of purple it's a little jarring. Nice work overall! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 8,961 Posted March 14, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted March 14, 2016 First off, love the text. That's really creative and original and I think it works absolutely brilliantly. The BG is a tad distracting and could benefit from a bit of blurring but it's not too bad. Lighting is okay but a little all over the place. I think the main faults in this are the colouring (it's very overdone as Jack mentioned) and the fact that there's a little of the piece that's oversharp (render especially) which, combined with the stocks, give it a noisy feel that doesn't really work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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