Cuffy 346 Posted March 10, 2016 Share Posted March 10, 2016 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28740-claimedoh-my-another-pt-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim 182 Posted March 11, 2016 Share Posted March 11, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28740-claimedoh-my-another-pt-reviewed/#findComment-319607 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted March 13, 2016 Share Posted March 13, 2016 I like where you're going with this, but it could use some finishing touches. Nice work with the blur, but it looks a little weird near the text where the background is in focus. Lighting could use some work, the render seems a bit dim. Try adding some Levels and Curves adjustment layers to bring out the contrast in the render and the sig. Nice work overall though, looking forward to seeing more from you! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28740-claimedoh-my-another-pt-reviewed/#findComment-320126 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,107 Posted March 14, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted March 14, 2016 Defnitely agree on the BG of the text, that stands out too me immediately as distracting. If you wanted to create that blur but were worried about it blurring the text, create the effect and then apply a mask to it of the text (Ctrl+click the text thumbnail and it would select it then mask that out). It wouldn't be perfect and it would take some fidgeting but it would be better. Lighting does need some improvements as well to really make the render pop. I can see where you were going with things though and it will comes with practice. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28740-claimedoh-my-another-pt-reviewed/#findComment-320447 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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