Jala 922 Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29013-claimedshernanigans-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,022 Posted March 21, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted March 21, 2016 (edited) Manips can be tricky sometimes, you have to watch out with what effects can and cannot work on them. For example, whatever is giving this a grey haze (looks like something set on screen maybe?) is a no go for this piece; the contrast is thrown way off. Get some curves layers in there to bring some darkness back in. Aside from that, the render is sitting a bit too high in the sig; I'd like to see his face down a bit further. The text is simple but relatively effective. Might help to get some really small text (borderline unreadable) as a way of "underlining" the main text. The face is a bit too sharp which isn't always a major issue but there isn't really a lot going on here so it does make it a bit distracting. Edited March 21, 2016 by Beketov Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29013-claimedshernanigans-22/#findComment-322336 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bojo 221 Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 that is the most amazing critique. Like, I learned something today. Can you do my current cola sig. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29013-claimedshernanigans-22/#findComment-322365 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim 182 Posted March 22, 2016 Share Posted March 22, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29013-claimedshernanigans-22/#findComment-322699 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,022 Posted March 25, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted March 25, 2016 Claiming made a bit of a mess in here so I'm bumping everything with only 1 vote. Will retain original posting order. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29013-claimedshernanigans-22/#findComment-323405 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted March 25, 2016 Share Posted March 25, 2016 He's pooping a big one here. Anyway, the stock on the top is washed up, you could use a curve layer to fix that. The render placement is good and the text is decent. good work. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/29013-claimedshernanigans-22/#findComment-323499 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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