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Very interesting and creative background work. The sig as a whole is too dark and I'm not a fan of the text being smudged in parts; the background would also benefit from being a bit smoother imo, the texture of it makes it look LQ in places.

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Very very dark unfortunately which is holding everything else back as I simply can't see it. The idea seems to be there with the waviness and I like where I think you were going with this but I would like to see some light to really get the elements to the forefront. I'm also concerned about the text style. That font (or is it the effects?) just doesn't seem o be really working flow wise with anything else.

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