McDouglas Graphic [Reviewed] [2/2]

[GordonBombay66 18]

Trying my hand at something else again...

 

[Molholt 2,183]

Start of some good things here, the background is a good choice and doesn't distract from the render. The render could maybe use some of that grunge styling to blend in with it some - maybe you smudge or erase some of the edges with a similar grunge brush to get that effect. The text really stands out and could maybe be toned down a bit, maybe a little smaller (if it's going to be so bright) or a little less bright (if its going to be big). It doesn't need both things to stand out. 

[Pandar 302]

The effect here is certainly more effective and makes more sense.  You could do a lot with blurring and blending to make it flow together better, and make it feel less like three or four things just put on top of each other.  Keep it up!