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Sounds like homework. Can't be that hard.

 

You never know, you might become a bard!

 

Shakespeare sucks anyways, make it your own.

 

Smoke weed or something. Get in the zone.

400 years from now this will be a play, then a book, then a movie. Or if Seth Rogen sees this, it will be a movie in a week.

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Sounds like homework. Can't be that hard.

 

You never know, you might become a bard!

 

Shakespeare sucks anyways, make it your own.

 

Smoke weed or something. Get in the zone.

 

I can't write a poem to save my life.. wanna see what i have right now? A bard? Dafuq? I don't smoke weed.. Im the preppy asian with a tiger mom :/

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A – Courage, why are you so tough to obtain

B – But in our society, thy the core

A – Those who believe they master thy, are rash

B – Others are cowardice

 

C – Thy create warriors that are rejoiced

D – Or, thy create cowards that are despised

C

D

 

E

F

E

F

 

G

G

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If I, one man alone, would fail to stand–
While others fear, with empty hope, one braver
Than themselves unto the breach, their craven
Act, beneath his mantle of command

Might hide; or fail to bravely raise my hand,
His side–when better led, with honour, gave
My pledge to such as he–to take, and save
As much as can be saved, no coward’s brand

Could sear my trust; or fail, in solitary
Rank, to muster, weak, my force of one,
While others act as beasts who fear to die,
In soul denying hope that I might care
To save their craven flesh when all is done,
And which my soul demands–then what am I?

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So by Shakespearean sonnet, do you mean iambic pentameter as well? Because that's a little bit too much thinking for me right now. Otherwise, if just rhyme is the point, you could just do something like 

 

C – Thy create warriors that are rejoiced

D – Or, thy create cowards that are despised

C - For until the last warriors' cries are voiced

D - Above all courage shall remain prized

 

E - Time again all seek courage's sweet call

F - But few find solace within its foreboding arms

E - Because those who seek, immense or small

F - Find little to speak of its roughshod charms

 

G - Courage to prevail is what I seek

G - If only to prevent a place among meek

 

NOTE: Created this in about 10 minutes while half watching the Blackhawks game. Don't take as gospel please. And also, I consider this night your punishment for taking damn AP Psych.

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So by Shakespearean sonnet, do you mean iambic pentameter as well? Because that's a little bit too much thinking for me right now. Otherwise, if just rhyme is the point, you could just do something like 

 

C – Thy create warriors that are rejoiced

D – Or, thy create cowards that are despised

C - For until the last warriors' cries are voiced

D - Above all courage shall remain prized

 

E - Time again all seek courage's sweet call

F - But few find solace within its foreboding arms

E - Because those who seek, immense or small

F - Find little to speak of its roughshod charms

 

G - Courage to prevail is what I seek

G - If only to prevent a place among meek

 

NOTE: Created this in about 10 minutes while half watching the Blackhawks game. Don't take as gospel please. And also, I consider this night your punishment for taking damn AP Psych.

 

That is an amazing ending to the poem bro.. really well done.. whats iambic pentameter? haha.. ya ik.. but it looks good on a college application.. especially when u are trying to get into Naval Academy or West Point

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There once was a man from Kildare
Who was screwing his wife on the stair.
When the Bannister broke
He quickened his stroke
And finished her off in mid air.

A classic!

 

 

 

SOO much better than shakespeare

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