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[Kesler 1,514]

Top 4 Dispersal Mock

1.   NEW YORK AMERICANS: Chase Keller

Centerman who can win you draws in any zone and in any key situation, a guy you want out on the ice when you're down a goal, Keller can score goals at any rate, with his size frame he can protect the puck very well and has no issues getting the puck and battling in the corners, will need to work on his two hundred foot game to become a true elite center in the VHL and one that was an all around ability to produce offense but also not be a defensive reliability. Chase Keller would instantly fit in with the core already in place in New York, the Americans would be setup with a duo down the middle like no other, Keller and Komarov would be as good as it gets as far as VHL standards go.

 

2.  SEATTLE BEARS: Shawn Gretzky

 

Veteran centerman who has had no issue scoring goals in his career, although being a centerman faceoffs is something that hold Gretzky down, two way game is solid, not incredible but will get the job done, playmaking is efficient with his current frame size, skating could use some work but doesnt hold him back. Much like Keller Gretzky would also fit right into the core already built on Seattle, Gretzky would be a nice addition and slide into there top six perfectly and could maybe push this Seattle team over the top.

3.  HC DAVOS DYNAMO: Shawn Brodeur 

 

A very young athletic goaltender, only one year plus from his draft Broduer will be a starting franchise goaltender, one of the biggest faults in Broduers game is certainly not a skill, its something in his genetics, his size is at least 2 inches short of being what a goaltender would like to be, though Broduer does make up for his lack of height with tenacity and drive. Brodeur was drafted to be the franchise keeper for the green and black Express. Well the only thing thats changed is the green will be swapped out with some purple. Broduer will be the starting goaltender for however long he wants to be on  Davos.

4.  TORONTO LEGION: Marc-Alexandre Leblanc

 Gifted with size, standing at six foot three inches, and weighing in at two-hundred and ten pounds, Leblanc has been a good player for some time now, much like Gretzky and Keller, Leblanc is a shoot first kind of centermen, although he may not be as rounded as the previous two centers, he can score at the same pace they can although being seasons older, but the knock on Leblanc is he will struggle distributing the puck to his wingers, his skating is solid and with his faceoff abilities he could fill in as a depth piece. Leblanc would be joining an already balanced and deep team in Toronto. Leblanc would be an upgrade over Finn for the second line center spot and could help push some of the other forwards on the Legion to be better or else he would fill in on the top line.

 

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[diamond_ace 3,114]

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35 minutes ago, diamond_ace said:

Players go to teams

This is where you think they are

Probably right on most

 

^That is a haiku^

One quality haikou.

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Review

Nice, I love me some more mock drafts. This was well written, some grammar errors but not enough to dock points  just keep an eye out for comma use. Gretzky has fit in very well in Seattle so far. It will be interesting to see what happens next season when the cap will forces some moves