Player profile

[Luke Allman 13]

                         Name Luke Allman
                         Age 17
                         Nationality British
                         Position Center
                         Hight 5'5
                         Weight 12 stone 
Background
Luke grew up in the town of stoke on Trent in England were he didn’t have a hockey rink close by so he had to go to Telford ice rink which is were he learned to skate and play hockey till he joined Telford’s hockey team at the age of 6 and he quickly became a MVP of the league with his goal a game record and a total 89 points which was a record in the league. Then joined the teenage league level at 10 which was early and was considered a top draft pick in British hockey league by the age of 11.
By time he was old enough to play in the British league he got a call from some VHLM scouts who thought he would be great for there league and they scouted him for the entirety of his last season in England where he posted a 100 goals, 100 assists in 75 games which is a British record. Now he’s just waiting to be drafted in the vhlm
Strengths
Goal Scoring
from a young age he was always able to hit a target with great accuracy and at the age of 5 he found an interest in ice hockey so his dad bought him a par of skates. He learned how to skate and tried out for a pee wee team in his hometown were he started a goal a game streak in his Frist season. Then came year 2 scoring 50 goals in 25 games he stayed at this level all the way through peewee and high school till he got a phone call off the VHLM Drafting Comity. 
Discipline
Luke is a team player with great discipline he doesn't take penalties hardly he is aware of his surroundings but don't let him fool you he can play an aggressive fore check and his durability is second to none he is also a key part to any penalty kill line as he will keep the pock away from the net
Defence 
His defensive mind is strong with his aim to be at the back with his blue liners when they don’t have the pock he also has anough speed to get back on D  he also finds a way to cause a 2 on 1 situation to go his way never leaving the goalie in a break away situation
Weakness
Size
Due to his hight he isn’t always the winner in a hit but he will always get back up and he dose have issues against some taller players on defence duties
Physically 
Luke is not the most imposing player on the ice which makes him a target of larger players but he can escape with speed just cause of his size he’s considered weak till he starts skating.
Finaly
Luke will be a valuable asset to any of the teams that draft him this season expect him to shine quickly 

[Nykonax 1,564]

Feedback: I'd use some more punctuation. You also have some spelling errors and capital errors. Otherwise pretty good

[Luke Allman 13]

Thank you