Samurai7 102 Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 Not very good but hope to keep improving Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6961-claimedyamazaki/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
BOOM 8,745 Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 Better then I was when I joined. Keep at it man. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6961-claimedyamazaki/#findComment-61190 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 Damn... This is nice, already better then me! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6961-claimedyamazaki/#findComment-61191 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Obviously Look: 2.5/3 - This is actually pretty solid for a first point task. The blending and render placement are both really good, and the colouring is decent. I think it could have done with a slightly more narrow canvas and the text placement/fontface isn't that great. I would have moved it up more to the middle of the right side and gotten rid of the stroke on it. Lighting also needed to be added to this. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6961-claimedyamazaki/#findComment-61904 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Coloring, text, blending, lighting,stock work, I'd say you have enough here.Look: 2.75/3 - Coloring, Blending, Stock work are all great . Text needs work as mentioned above and same thing with canvass size.Creativity: 1/1 - SureTotal: 5.75/6 Final: 6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6961-claimedyamazaki/#findComment-62402 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6961-claimedyamazaki/#findComment-118595 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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