mcfox [1/2]

[Nykonax 1,564]

[gorlab 4,321]

On 10/11/2019 at 3:33 PM, Nykonax said:

 

 

Probably the best graphic I've graded thus far (out of 6 other ones) as you have a nice clean piece, the render is cropped well and looks high-def/good quality. The text is very uninspired but does add to the clean aesthetic here. I think your choice of color gradient for the background doesn't mesh well with the vivid red of the render. I think simply changing the color gradient of the background to one more complimentary of the red/white of the render & text, is an easy way to cook this into a really dope piece.

 

Also there's no real lighting, or blending of the render with the background at all. The piece suffers from looking like 3 photoshop layers. The background gradient, the player ontop of it, and the text on top of the player  (which IMO is never going to look like a great piece of art)

 

 

a p pr o v al g an g    but you got a long way to go. I should throw you into my dojo with my young killers and see if you survive.