Jamie 438 Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 For last week please ! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7693-claimedoldie/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Enough was done here. Look: 2.5/3 - Strong points are the text and the overall "look", but the lighting is sort of lacklustre and some of the stock work is a bit off. Maybe try distorting the outer stock work, or overlaying some gritty textures to blend them in more. Very cool sig though. Creativity: 1/1 - purple Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7693-claimedoldie/#findComment-70145 Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted May 10, 2014 Share Posted May 10, 2014 Effort: 3/3 Look: 2.5/3 - This has some good parts, like the coloring and flow to it as well as some of the stock work, but in general this could use some improvement. The text needs to be simplified, specifically by removing the subtext on either side of it as well as the stroke. The lighting isn't particularly bad, you've got a good light source there and it has the potential to look good on the render, but IMO it's just too bright. I feel like you've got a great start here, with a bit more work this is sure to be a great sig. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.5/6 FINAL GRADE: 6/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7693-claimedoldie/#findComment-71585 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smarch 3,153 Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/7693-claimedoldie/#findComment-72395 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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