Flames1848 11 Posted June 8, 2014 Share Posted June 8, 2014 Home of number 77 Hello and welcome to Mike McGrattans presentation of his homepage called "The home of number 77". After a few words we will show you some of the content in detail. Mike McGrattan: "In the new world with the new media public realtion will be more and more important. Best way to show the league how you work as a player is next to your stats how you manage your player and how you sell it to the public. I think the homepage is easy to handle and i hope you will have a little bit fun with it." If you go on "http://mcgrattan77.jimdo.com/" you will enter the homepage. You will see the logo of Mikes current VHLM-Team, the Ottawa Lynx, with his number 77 on it. On the right side you see two links (VHL/SHL Germany) , the currently earned TPE and the links to the VHL-Update and Skillsetpage of Mike McGrattan. The SHL Germany is a nice EHM-Simulation-League with 30 real good managers. Its completely played in german and the current Stanley-Cup-Champion in the 2015/2016 Season are the St. Louis Blues. Mike McGrattan is managing the Philadelphia Flyers there. The SHL Flyers are in a very hard rebuild but will hav very good picks at this years draft. At the bottom of the page you will the the menu with this points: Home – Homepage, you will start from here Bio – The biography of Mike McGrattan was the first point task from him in the VHL Rookie Profile – This will be profiled after his rookie-season with the ottawa lynx Media Spots – In the Media-Spot section you will find all published Media-Spots from Mike after they are rated The Fan590 – The Fan 590 section is like the Media-Spots section but the Spots will be published immediatly there TPE-Tracker – There you can see a listing with all earned TPE year by year and all open point-tasks Player Stats – In the player stats menu you will find stats about Mike as a person. Trades, Drafts and any other transaction will be listed here. Team Stats – Like the name of this section says it this section is all about the team. Team-Stats like the standings, roster, lines and so on are shown here with a link. Awards – Here you will hopefully find some earned Awards and Trophys by Mike McGrattan in future. Its about league and international awards. Mike McGrattan: "We tried to keep our side as simple as possible. We think that is the best way to show only the important thinks and not some boring stuff. We will keep the homepage up to date. It would be very nice if we can get a few feedbacks and maybe some ideas for improvement for our new little homepage. Please visit us @ http://mcgrattan77.jimdo.com Thank you! Fire Tortorella and Higgins 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Guest Svoboda_3 Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 (edited) Content: 2.75/3 466 words. I've never really graded anything along these lines. It was tough to gauge the article, cause it wasn't really one. I liked the fact that you put a lot of effort into the graphics and the website, I just didn't think this was a real article, but more of a 590. Nevertheless, I wasn't too hard on you in this section.Grammar: 1/2 These listed, plus a few missing commas, which I didn't list. 77". = 77." realtion = realation i = I Team = team ) , = ), skillsetpage = skill-set page Its = It's german = German hav = have years = year's you will the the menu = you will find the menu this points = these points ottawa lynx = Ottawa Lynx immediatly = immediately Trophys = TrophiesAppearance: 1/1 You fucking made a website. Overall: 4.75/6 Edited June 9, 2014 by Svoboda_3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire Tortorella 2,653 Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 Content: 2.5/3 - Like Svoboda, I had a hard time trying to figure out what grade to give this. While this was a good introduction to your website, it kind of felt like it lacked content. Not really sure how else to describe it other than it just needed more in order to get full marks. Grammar: 1/2 - I know it may not look like it with the grades, but I feel like your writing is improving. Just had one more to add to Slobo. Mikes current = Mike's current Appearance: 1/1 - Awesome-sauce. Overall: 4.5/6 FINAL: 5/6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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