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Davey's Future Outlook

 

 

Looking forward at Davey Jones career, he has a lot to look forward to still. He is still young and is about to enter his first season of depreciation. While he has been somewhat of a disappointment this season, he has a lot to look forward to. He has been a great addition to the Davos Dynamo in his short career and he hopes he can pay them back for bringing him on board. He has won a continental cup in his first season with the team and he wants more. Last season he couldn't help the team win another cup and he has been beating himself up ever since then. He worked hard during the off-season to prepare for his 5th season in the VHL. He is hoping that he can put up similar numbers to his sophomore season when he topped 100 points and looked like a steal of a trade with the Cologne Express.

 

So far in his 5th season, he has been quite a decent piece for this Davos team so far. He hasn't really been the top scorer for the team like he envisioned, but at least he has been of help to the team. The team has been playing together as a team pretty well so far in the season and it has been paying off. Davey has been trying to work extra hard in efforts to help win more games. He has only amassed 60 measly points this season and hopes that he can top 100 points again this season. He has appeared in 43 games so far this season and there are 29 games left. It is a big task for him but he would love to accomplish it. Also the team has won 31 of those 43 games and he hopes to help lead the team to at least 50 wins. For that to happen, he would have to help his team win 19 of those 29 games that are remaining.

 

After facing depreciation, Davey will be on his last contract year with the HC Davos Dynamo. He hasn't quite decided what he will do when that happens. He may go back to contemplating retirement, he may decide to return to the Dynamo or he may test free agency. Now if he tests free agency, his thing is he doesn't worry about the money or if the team is built to win. He wants to be able to be a part of a locker room that has people who are talkative and he wants to be able to start. He knows he is a first line caliber player as he has been playing there all season long. He has a few destinations but some of the ones he will mark off his list are: The Calgary Wranglers, The Cologne Express and The Vasteras Iron Eagles. He is interested in playing for the other franchises more than those last three stated. More will be reveled when the current season ends.

Edited June 8, 2014 by Da Trifecta

[Guest Svoboda_3]

Content: 3/3

501 words. It felt somewhat start and stop-ish, but overall it was a decent piece. I liked that you included Helsinki as a team that could land you. I also liked that you felt that you owed Davos something and at the same time, it's really nice seeing the point tasks being done from you.

Grammar: 2/2

Try to avoid using repetition and using the same phrase in the same sentence.

 

continental cup = Continental Cup

in efforts = in an effort

The = the (x3)

Appearance: 1/1

Looked clean.

Overall: 6/6

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